The pain is felt in this write, it expresses a deep sadness in your heart. May you one day find the peace and joy you seek in your heart.

sadaddy

Again this is another wonderful poem that held so much emotion! keep up the good work!

Yes i know but its not word for word like avril leveignes mine got bits and pieces of difference and not only that. thats how i feel inside.

Falling into the darkness that's inside of me

i really love this line, it's great imagery, and the way you began your poem was excellent, i really like your ideas and use of words, great poem! xox lithium