Comments : Watching from afar

  • 17 years ago

    by Jayde

    HEy Laura, I loved this poem it's beautiful! Oh and I love the fairy one too, you're a great writer

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Im crying here...lol, such beauty, i just cant imagine what you are going through, if your poems are souly based upon your feeling and true expirienced, you must have had some good times then...i can imagine this scenatio...You looking up onto the star and reciting this poem in your head, but thinking of your loved one..., so amazing...keep up the work...your poem has something that others poems lack..."feeling"...

  • 17 years ago

    by nicole

    I like =)

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Beautiful! i love that. it is so sweet!!!! 5/5

    xoxo kisses