I Give To You

by debbylyn   Nov 29, 2006


My eyes I give so you can see
The world the way I do.
My heart I give so you may
Know I love no one but you.
My life I give for you to keep
And intertwine with yours.
My soul I give so we can be
Together evermore.
I know my eyes are safe with you
They never will be blind.
I know my heart will never break,
For you will treat it kind.
I know my life you'll cherish
And safe with you I'll be.
I know my soul will be
With your's through all eternity.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    4.8? O.k. Who voted lower than 5?
    Come on, own up? Next time remember specs and dictionary....
    If you hit the wrong key, you are forgiven.
    JUST DON'T LET IT HAPPEN AGAIN!!
    Right then adjustment..
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  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Stunningly good....
    whoevers on the end of that he must be on the floor....if he isn't..... kick him out the door!! this must be read very... very.... slowly. beautiful words...

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    6

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Hey how did this get to be a 4.8? This poem is absolutely perfect!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent rhyming on this one! The flow and tone was flawless!
    One of your best i think.
    Fab work!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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