"If I keep locked the door."
I think this should be rephrased, but other then that your message seems clear, basically because you tsated it. But there was a bit of confusion because when you started on the 5th stanza I thought the poem had ended and that was a little note like how some people are started to arrange their poetry. But then I noticed the last sentance rhymed ans it went on. Otherwise I would have gone on with that impression. Choose as you may to change that. But maybe other people with a little more intelligence then I would notice that already. In all it is a very good poem, well thought out. I like it. Juts I dont think you should say (in the poem) that it isnt your best poem. It is just a little different. By the way thank you for commenting my poem! it means allot!
sincerely
~skittles

I have not tried my hardest
For my heart I must protect,
But no good this will do my life
And alone I will be left.

so very true yet so many of us do this, fantastic write, its got such a good flow and its so heartfelt. . im adding you to my favs

I really liked that. The rhyming and flow of the whole poem was very good, and your message was clearly displayed. Nice job.

This was a very beautifully written poem with such heartfelt and true emotions. I could relate to the first half of it.. I never got the courage to actually let anyone in. But you did an amazing job on this and I really like how it seems you had an epiphany of letting people in. It defintely gives people, like myself, something to think about. You did a really good job on this! ((P.S. I had already commented on The Music That We Play-I commented on it again too.. sorry & I realized I commented on The Night before I commented on it again. So I am doing this and another instead.. hope you don't mind :) ))

Nice feel ya right there very nicely done

Sorry i havent emailed in a while but i did to night. plus i just have to keep up with your fantastic poems i swear if only i as good as you.but completley liked no loved it keep up the good work. love yas girlie

Wow, just wow, you a really talented writter, I loved it. The emotion within this poem was fantastic. The flow was outstanding, and the structure was great.

However, this part,

"I cannot let that happen
For with you I will not part."

The first line in that should either be,
"I can not let that happen" OR "I can't let that happen"

The second line, should be, "For with you, I will not part."

Other than that it was a well written poem. You have talent, keep up the Amazing work.

Peace, Joe

You have done another great job my dear. you are amazing. I so love to read your poems as they so touch me.
great write once again and nothing less than a 5/5 as you really deserve it.