Dis poem is really postive i like it and thank u for da comment

I think that your poem is good....there is alot of slang tho, and it would sound alot better without it

What a wonderful way to word your thughts. You are talented at what you do and how you do it. Don't stop.

What a wonderful way to word your thughts. You are talented at what you do and how you do it. Don't stop.

Great poem!!! =o] _Mya_