Comments : Our lost love that never was

  • OMG DANIELLE!!! *tears* ok..now you have to read my latest poem because if you don't I will cry. I just wrote it and over e-mail I will tell you why I wrote it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mike

    Nice. Its sentimental i like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely.
    So good.
    Might I suggest putting your poems into multiple stanzas instead of cramming it all into one big stanza. Your poems are very good but maybe try multiple stanzas as something new!
    Great job!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I loved this poem, Its really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Awww its beautiful, you are amazing Danielle

    //Khrystyne\\