Comments : I dont know what to call this...pain maybe?

  • 17 years ago

    by Trish

    Hey....I love this poem...I can so relate because I am going through that same thing. They only want what is on the outside and they are to busy looking at that, so they don't see all the hurt that's going on in your head.

  • 17 years ago

    by Trish

    I can relate to this poem really well..I have been there and I felt like no one cared because no one came to help me when I needed them the most. Almost like they had better thing to do then help me. Your poem is really good. Keep up the work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    5/5
    this poem is amazing! You've got quite a talent and it shows through your work. I've always wondered something maybe you can answer this question for me....if this is something you went through or are currently going through do you think u could have written this if u hadn't had this happen?
    Keep writing.
    ur friend
    Kat

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Deep,
    mhmm its like how iam kinda,
    but im not skinny or pritteh.
    its really good i like alot
    xx