by Lost & Delirious Nov 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
She looks out the window, |
Aw.. this is really sad.. i really like your style.. i like how you dont come out and say he broke my heart.. or whatever it is in this poem that hurt you.. its really beautifull the way you just describe your emotions and leave the rest for interpretation |
by Vanessa
A well penned poem, emtions dripping, from every word, amazing job. I like your style of writitng, you seeem to have a way with words.5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
Very sad, but you have done a great job putting words together as a great poem....... |
Your writing is amazing, I love it so much |