This flows so well! That really stood out to me as i read it, it all worked together. This is quite a unique poem i think, and it's well written, yet again. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

Way to go Nat!!.. Wow, it's not done?! There's more to it!! OMG! I wanna read!!.. I am still very upset about my computer crashing. *Sigh*

Great poem, its nit that bad. 4/5...keep it up.

!!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
I return the favor if you comment back

Great flow to the poem...