It feels like its not complete. It seems like that the opening to a really great poem or story.

I love this poem
i really love it its sooo good
it just makes me feel really happy
and puts really nice pictures of summer in my head !~
i want it to be summer sooooooo much, so this poem helps a bit
i think this is amzing
5/5
me x x x x

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This is really nice poem, you have done a great job with the words,
you have created a nice pictures with the words, keep it up 5/5 from me.

I liked the imagery... but i feel like incomplete? its like i wanna know whats next? is there more? i think you can add up to this one and make it more beautiful than it already is... ;) keep up the good work!

~angel~

Broad Imagery And a Useful Vocabulary, Every Word Complimented The Meaning And Flow Of This Poem, It Didn't Need Ryhme, It Had Talent

Not To Mention You Gave Me Natureeeeeee! I Love Nature Poems & Your Awesome In Writing These..
5.5? xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I loved your poem keep up the great work

Well done, my friend.
Nature is a wonderful thing, and you portrayed this well throughout. It was short but it worked well, could do with a few more lines maybe, but well done
xxxx

Very, very beautiful imagery. indeed, nature is a wonderful thing, and i enjoy reading about it. you did a great job with this poem.

travis

Nice use a words. I like the way you described everything in this so nicely. Great job.
May I suggest- use punctuation other than commas.. It'll help the flow. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

Aww wow this is simply beautiful. it's short, but wonderfuly written. keep it up 5/5

~Kristina

I liked this one really much it painted a image in my mind 5/5

I loved this, it was really sweet.
The imagery was absolutely fantastic.
I also enjoyed the wording and flow muchly.

Great imagery!
i think this is a really great poem. if flowed nice and was so sweet. the only thing bad i could say is that i want more! i think you could add onto this and makeit amazing. it flowed awesomely and it didnt need to rhyme! i think nature poems are your niche.

x3 Lauren

This is my last one for tonight. i gtg. ill do the rest tomorrow. =]
`thanks again fo the comments. =]

I didn't think that this one flowed like the other ones. The second stanza wasn't as organized as the first one. It had great imagery though. *4/5*

Alyson

This is a very good nature poem, great job, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Short but well expressed it was a lovely poem.

xxx alex xxx (6)

Oh please keep going!! The wording and imagery and everything was amazingly written what a splendid poem!

The imagery is good, butIt seem incomplete somehow. But still you did a good job 4/5