Comments : Slowly

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    A great poem,
    i love the choice of words you used in these sentences:

    slowly falling
    barely crawling
    relentlessly bawling

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    Hey I really liked this a lot. First a love that is not returned and then bam! True love and they live happily ever after! Good Job!

    Astryd

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good descriptive words Nice job I liked this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Nicely quaint and very good.