Powerful poem. But I dislike it for one reason and one reason only, due to no fault of your own. In my own life, in my recent and by far most painful experience I'v had to endure, I was the girl the guy was with when he was with another that he wasn't supposed to be with...Guys suck and I have no desire whatsoever to dive head first into the deep end of the pool of love for fear of crushing my head on the bottom again. I love your writing style though. Keep it up!

~dandy~