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by xLaurax Nov 30, 2006 category : Dark, fantasy / fantasy, mystical
Tears of flame Burn so bright In the darkness In the night Tears of flame Never heal Pain is something All must feel Tears of flame Blur my sight I wronged Trying to right Tears of flame When they start Can only be stopped By a loving heart
by Mistake
This is really good. I like it except for the: I wronged Trying to right. That was the only part to me that seemed kind of hard to say along with the rest of the poem. Other than that, really good.