I really like this. I like how you can tell what it means without the poem actually saying it and it has a great flow. You are really good! 5/5

Totally cool though slightly confusing with some of the comparisons
Charisma*

Very good...quite a talent you have...i really like this one too..it flows so nicly, and you rymed some words that i wouldn't have even thought of, your one of my favorties now....lol, another 5/5