Pretty romantic...liked it

all the best and take care

Great poem. Relationships and love with some one else are so hard to find all i can do is write about it. But it looks like you have it all figuered out. Love the poem hope you liked mine haha later p.s keep up the good work

Very good poem. keep it up. this is a great poem.5/5

Awwwww.. that was soo sweet.. it made my heart melt.. keep up the fantastic job!!

Beautiful poem. ^_^

Awwwwe that was so romantic.
Keep it it, its great!

Beatiful i really appreciate this poem.. sometimes writing poems help us to show some words that we cant say to someone. nice written and hope angela like it.. thanks for sharing and god bless

Oh wow, this was very beautiful and touching, this angela seems like a wonderful girl. This poem was amazingly well written, I loved the words you used and the description was perfect. Your rhymes were perfect and flowed wonderfully, they did not seem forced at all. I especially liked this line "My heart beats within her chest". Amazing work, keep it up.

--Steph

I like your poems a lot..That girl is lucky to have a sweet guy like you lol I hope it all works out and thanks for the comment...awsome work keep it up thanks for sending out your amazing talent too ..awsome poem

So sweet..jut straight up feeling and the rhymn makes it more affective in this case..wow

lissa

I love your poem!!!!!!

I love it because my name is angela.. i wish someone would have written me this beautiful poem!

What a sweet tribute to the one you love!

Wow... another very sweet, wonderful, amazing poem!!! you should write poetry for living, i'm sure you'll have a big success!!!! ;)
celi ****

This is soooo sweet, i would give anything for my man to say somehting like that to me! keep up the great work. you have a gift. your way with words is astounding