Goodbye

by End Of Eternity   Nov 30, 2006


Thunder shows me my way
While driving in a new car
It's a beautiful brand new day
And this time i'll go very far

My shoes are ripped apart
Got holes in my jakcet
But my baby is by my side
And this time we are loving it

Kicked out of my job
Though i boast i quit
Cocky is not the right term for me
While i am alive and i am free

Now that the time has finally come
And i have left everything far behind
My baby will give me one last kiss
Through a bullet to blow my mind

** I guess you know what i mean by my "baby" here.. :o)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    I read this poem before, But never had a chance to comment on it!
    heres the time...your idea was very simple, pure & true!

    something sweet to read..& proud to write!
    your talent will never stop you from taking the chances & writing more awesome & great ideas ;)

    Best Of Luck My Bro
    Yours
    NemO xOxOxOxOx

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    I really enjoyed reading this poem! You have a lot of talent! Excellent write!

  • 18 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Very good poem thanks for the comment

    VOCTECH ALL THE WAY linda 2010

  • 18 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    Fairly good. kinda just makes ya heart stop when u read the last paragraph! nice write

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni

    I like this. I don't know if you've heard of a band called Augustana because it sounds like one of their songs called Bullets. The likeness is uncanny. I don't know if you got your inspiration from there, or not, but I really like this poem nontheless. 5/5

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