Gosh, what have you been up to? I find these two new poems very different from your collection. Even the writing style is different.

A unique piece, loved it.
Michelle

The last 3 comments were what I was gonna say. Hehe. Interesting and enjoyable read. The last 2 lines were actually my favorite, though. =] Keep it up!

-Liz

"Cocky is not the right term for me
While i am alive and i am free"

Hehe, i liked that line and the way i interpreted it was probably different from how you meant, but it doesn't make it any less fab!
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

Very touching :) I loved it, nice work 99/5 :)

Soo amazing & so touching..it really is a unique piece...you have great talent.keep up the good work

I like this. I don't know if you've heard of a band called Augustana because it sounds like one of their songs called Bullets. The likeness is uncanny. I don't know if you got your inspiration from there, or not, but I really like this poem nontheless. 5/5

Fairly good. kinda just makes ya heart stop when u read the last paragraph! nice write

Very good poem thanks for the comment

VOCTECH ALL THE WAY linda 2010

I really enjoyed reading this poem! You have a lot of talent! Excellent write!

I read this poem before, But never had a chance to comment on it!
heres the time...your idea was very simple, pure & true!

something sweet to read..& proud to write!
your talent will never stop you from taking the chances & writing more awesome & great ideas ;)

Best Of Luck My Bro
Yours
NemO xOxOxOxOx