by XXTruthSeekerXX Nov 30, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Breathe |
A very innocent and pleasing piece. You should be proud to know of your skills in this literature. congratulations. |
by Keath
Nice poem. No rhyme but somehow there is a rhythm in it. I like that the end ends with the begin (tree.) Lovely sentences, keep up the good work. 5/5 |
by Sweet lig
I think u really have the great talent to show us so keep it up and continue writing and inspiring ur readers great poem... |
by Matt Dahl
I read your poem and I think it was outstanding, keep up the good work! |