It's one of my favourites too!
It's so happy and heartfelt. You really showed how much you care for him and appreciate him in this piece.
5/5
*Gem*

(I was wondering if you would be interested in joined a poetry club on here. It's called Release the Voice Within. I learn a lot about poetry there and i've made some fabulous friends. Think about it? x)

Awwwh, this was so beautiful and sweet.
I could see how heartfelt the words were.
The wording and imagery were a pleausure to read, as was the whole piece.

Awwww, this is my favourite so far... it is very sweet to think of the 2 kids playing and how easy it was being that young and free.

i can relate to the relationship as i too met a boy very young who was my best friend and was my soulmate. losing him was heart breaking and this poem made me remember to look at the good times we had. thank you for that.

only thing i can add is the seventh line ... says form instead of from. xx

"We were friends form the very start"

thank you for writing this one. xxx