Lying Broken On The Floor

by Angel Of Death   Nov 30, 2006


Boy, open up your pretty blue eyes,
and look the hell around,
This girl is crazy in love with you,
and her heart lies broken on the ground.

She's finally had enough,
She's giving up on love.
You're her last chance of happiness,
She loves you more than life.

Of course, if you'd rather see her crash,
You can option B out the door,
She's going no where fast,
She will still be here tomorrow,
Lying broken on the floor.

[Not that great, But worse things have happened]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was awesome.. Nice write. Each stanza was just amazing, and relatable for a lot of people i would imagine. Over all i loved this rite heaps. keep it up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I like it, something odd about it, even though it aint that good..

    ..i still like it!

    OCTOBER X

  • 16 years ago

    by Tyler Durden

    I've thought about writing like this before, but didnt think I could pull it off.

    You did amazingly. But I think I would have made some of the words stronger. add a phrase or too. Maybe a "WTF are you doing?" kinda thing, where the first stanza is concerned.
    But all else, top notch.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Wow. i really like this poem. 5/5.

    keep it up.

    much love,
    mac.<3

  • 16 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    No, i disagree with you cuz i thought that poem was good and dhenz..

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