I love you poem great work!

I read your poem and I think it was outstanding, keep up the good work!

Good One!!!!!!!!

Nice =] Go sweety

Not great , your kidding me how could you say that its fantastic!!!

Whoa.i really like this poem =]

I really liked this poem, keep up the good work

I like this poem because I understand where you're coming from. Keep it up!

~Bobbi

No, i disagree with you cuz i thought that poem was good and dhenz..

Wow. i really like this poem. 5/5.

keep it up.

much love,
mac.<3

I've thought about writing like this before, but didnt think I could pull it off.

You did amazingly. But I think I would have made some of the words stronger. add a phrase or too. Maybe a "WTF are you doing?" kinda thing, where the first stanza is concerned.
But all else, top notch.
5/5

I like it, something odd about it, even though it aint that good..

..i still like it!

OCTOBER X

This was awesome.. Nice write. Each stanza was just amazing, and relatable for a lot of people i would imagine. Over all i loved this rite heaps. keep it up. 5/5