My angel

by Sweet lig   Nov 30, 2006


Angel in heaven
Watching me all over each day,
Echo through the winds
Knowing that he is with me,

Carry me on my angel wings
Give to me the joy of peace,
The love that it will send
And forever never fades,

Angel of my whole life
His wings so filled with glory
His spirit filled with joy
And his heart filled with love

In times of my troublesome
I feel a gentle breeze,
To reminds me that his there
To guide me forever!

Sweet angel in my heart
My treasured gift from god's above
Through the sunsets or sunrise
And till the end of time

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah

    Great portrying ur angel and its sweet and full of good encouragement to everyone i love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem. I don't like topic very much but you wrote this piece greatly. Some lines are really excellent, it deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hm.
    I'd put this in "Life" under "Religion". But, anyways.

    I really liked this. It was very inspirational and full of hope. I just don't know why, but I love that you don't rhyme.
    Anyways.
    Nicely done, very nice indeed.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Ok 4th line should be (Knowing that he is with me), still very good, 5/5!!! absolute talent in your poems, so keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I liked reading this. The flow was swell and it kind of leaves me wondering. Is this angel of yours physically with you or emotionally with you? wonderful writing. 5/