This is one of the very best i've read in a looong time. I'm very impressed.

Hey, for you first poem that you've posted, that was pretty darn good, actually, it's good, period. Though I do have one slightly negative thing to say about this poem. I think the last two stanzas lowered the standard of the piece. Anyway, I loved the rhymes, loved the words and i loved the style. Good work

Brad

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem 'The Mermaid'.

Wow, nice poem.
definetly 5/5.
i added you to favorites, i'm hoping to see more poems from you soon.

I absolutely loved it
-deadbeatromance