I like your poem alot!!!!! its really good infact i love it
rory-lena

You worded this poem amazingly. It painted a great image in my head. Good job.

I really liked this poem! The rhymes and flow were great and the overall poem is very nicely written ^^
5/5

Another really good poem. Are you sure you 14? lol. I think my favorite stanza was the first one. I love the was you write; good rhymes, good flow, good wording...and it makes sense, lol.

Brad

Wow, I have 2 agree wiv Brad ur poems are very deep, (not to sound patronising,), for a 14 r old. A wonderful piece, very creatively written with flawless rhyme and flow. Ur now on my faes 2 bdw. I only keep certain ppl on my faves, if i actually rly like all their work and I know I'm going to read it, and you're on of those poets.
Much love,,
beth x

I love your style of writing in this poem. It has such great imagery. Great job!

Hey Katster I never realised how good you were mine don't even compare to yours lol see ya l8er