by *Charisma*
Okay...it's not your best, but it's good, and on this site it's so rare to find people who rhyme their poems GOOD so I enjoy reading yours because of that! LOL And I did like it, but I've seen you do better. |
by Kurt
Well written, even for a quickie. Thought it was fluent and the rhythm was not bad. Poem seemed lacking, although I'm not sure what would have enhanced it. Definately a good poem. Keep up the writing. |
by Katlyn
This poems is strong and its true about lost loves at times... 5/5 great job. |
I know what u mean by a quick poem....thats what my latest "Goodbye" is all about....i guess u dont hv all these feelings inside u...but still u just released all negative vibes. |
by anna
Hey... nice poem! i liked it!! im not an expert but i no wat i like and i like ur work!! so keep it up! and thanx 4 all ur encouraging comments! means alot poppet!! |
I like it...5/5 |
by Lix
I'm soooo jealous!!! i wish I had ur talent! |