I love this short but sweet... keep it up...

AWWWW..... AMAZING!!!! so cute!!! damn.. me out of words!!!

5/5 ! =D

Thnx ashley!!! its my second short poem ever......i didnt really know if its any good......thnx hun for commenting and i hopei hear from you again!!!:)

Thnx bi!!!! im soooooooooo glad that you liked it!!!!! its my 2nd short poem!! and you know me i like to write long emotional poems all the time!! so this was like a change for me....im sooo glad that it was a success.....luv ya bi!(K)

Hehhee!! yeah believe me i do know that!!! =)
what can i say?! u got the talent! so keep on writting hun bun!

Wow. i realy like this poem. and 2 awnser ur question no. its a dearm i had. and this guy who i want to father my baby was there and he was holding out daughter and i just want that more than anything. i know it sounds stupid but its the way i feel. anyway. ur a great writer. and thanx 4 the coment.