by Lillye Nov 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
No-one really believes |
This poem has an excellent flow throughout it! It was really sweet, and had an excellent usage of vocabulary. An awesome read! Keep it up! xx |
by Tite
Ur first luv is always da best. I hope dis person treats u right and i wish yall happy timez ahead. |
This was a great poem and it flowed well but be careful because wishes with love rarely come true 5/5 |