As I Stare Into The Mirror

WOW! I really like this poem a lot, I love how you made it feel indepedent and it actually made me feel happy also...You have real talent, keep up the good work...

The use of repitition was great! A very inspiraring peace fo writing, it made me smile. Great flow. An amazing read! Keep it up! xx

Wonderful write, I loved the emotion within. I started to get into it, and I felt that it ended ubruptly. Other than that small minor thing, I thought it was great, the Flow and the structure was great. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

This is wonderful. i really like how you repeated the first line in every stanza. but what i didnt like was that you kept repeating that you were happy or smiling in every stanza.. it just didnt flow right. but over all you did a great job on it. 5/5

~Kristina

Didnt have much impact on me... but really liked the last stanza... hey at least it has a happy ending... :)

~angel~