Love is the slowest form of suicide

by Tara   Nov 30, 2006


I promise i wouldn't do this
Why did I do this?
I cut the person i love in pieces

Whats coming over me?
Bloods everywhere
I took the knife and told him i loved him
then started gutting

He looked at me and said why?
Black tears ran down my face
Dropped down and started screaming,"Are You Happy?"

He looked at me and said i love you
Finally i know why i did this
to be with him forever
Grabbed the knife
Blood spattered
Love is the slowest form of suicide

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    I really liked how you compared and put this together. Very Nice poem. 5/5 all the way! Great Job! Keep it up!

    Peace Always!

  • 17 years ago

    by Caseyleigh

    Its ok, but could do wiv more use of words, and its rather confusing try using a thesaurus lol :)
    loadz a luff
    Casey
    xxx
    xx
    x

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