AN ANGEL\'S TOUCH

by XxChelseaXx   Nov 30, 2006


Everyday that goes by
That I'm not with you
I sit and think about all the things
That we have gone through

Every little memory
Both the good and the bad
Reminds me of all the happier
Times that we had.

Now that you're gone
So very far away
I shed a tear for you
With each passing day

We will meet up again
Someday when my time is gone
Until then ill pray to you
And sing to you our song

I know you wont forget me
Im the one you loved so much
So when I feel the cool summer breeze
Ill know its and angelâ??s touch

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXMohawkedMahemXx

    Such a lovely poem.. makes you smile when you read it.. =]
    great Job..
    5/5
    .:Hammy:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww that was really sweet. I loved the imagery and the emotion you put into this, amazing work.

    --Steph

    p.s. I noticed a few mistakes in the last line, you can probably pick them out yourself;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    I thought this was lovely! Very interesting! Though I found a little problem.

    "Ill know its *and* (an) angel's touch"

    Hehe! Just thought I could point that out. Overall, it was great! =)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This peom had excelent flow to it. it was well written. good job. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    I agree, more discriptive meaningfull words would increase the good of this poem so much.I know that wasent even english but im really tired haha.
    None the less I really enjoyed your poem. Awesome job.
    xox

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