I agree, more discriptive meaningfull words would increase the good of this poem so much.I know that wasent even english but im really tired haha.
None the less I really enjoyed your poem. Awesome job.
xox

This peom had excelent flow to it. it was well written. good job. 5/5

I thought this was lovely! Very interesting! Though I found a little problem.

"Ill know its *and* (an) angel's touch"

Hehe! Just thought I could point that out. Overall, it was great! =)
5/5

Aww that was really sweet. I loved the imagery and the emotion you put into this, amazing work.

--Steph

p.s. I noticed a few mistakes in the last line, you can probably pick them out yourself;)

Such a lovely poem.. makes you smile when you read it.. =]
great Job..
5/5
.:Hammy:.