Unreal

by Pieper   Nov 30, 2006


Fear just runs my life
I don't know where to turn
my hands just seem to tremble
my eyes just seem to burn

What happened to forever
your were my Bestest Friend
my life just seems so empty
i want it all to end

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittini

    Short sweet and to the point really cute but really sad and i can really relate to it right now. really nice write 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    I really liked it. It seems like a poem you can build on, just let your emotions go in it, it was good and had a good flow, but I can tell there's more to it. Lovely work.

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