Sunset

by Darcie   Nov 30, 2006


Purples, pinks, and blues
spread across the sky,
The most beautiful sight
I've seen with my two eyes,

The sun was slowly setting
behind the rolling hills,
In the golden rays of light
were swaying daffodils,

Then within minutes
the beautiful colors were gone,
But not to worry because
they will be back at dawn.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was good i liked it alot

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think in the last stanza it should be 'they'll' to make it flow better. But it was a pretty poem with great rhymes and a nice picture. A true appreciation of nature.
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Very sweet little poem..nice rhyming and good technique:)...well well done:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Nice imagery and beatiful choice of words. i love the message of this poem keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

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