Very good poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

Nice imagery and beatiful choice of words. i love the message of this poem keep it up!

Very sweet little poem..nice rhyming and good technique:)...well well done:)

I think in the last stanza it should be 'they'll' to make it flow better. But it was a pretty poem with great rhymes and a nice picture. A true appreciation of nature.
Charisma*

This was good i liked it alot