Caught Into Your Love

by BeautifulxMess   Nov 30, 2006


It's amazing how you are here;
Holding me, and kissing my lips.
You rub your hand along my arm;
Caress my face with your fingertips.

Your smile is an unforgettable sight;
It fills me up with such felicity.
You found my soul lost and cold;
I'm caught into your ecstasy.

When love forgotten my heart;
Hope casted my dreams aside.
When courage bewildered my soul;
You saw the fire that ignited inside.

You lifted my feet off the ground;
Spread my fragile wings to soar.
You spoke with great affection;
Twas you who've I'd long for.

I'll hold on to you with all I have;
You're my antidote on life.
Hold me close on your chest;
We can dance through the night.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    This was adorable.
    You painted a beautiful picture in my mind.
    Your flow was flawless.
    & you expressed your love wonderfully.
    Great job!
    5/5

    XxAmberxX

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, this is soooo absolutley beautiful. It brought this huggge smile on my face. haha. It flowed so well & the rhymes were great. Nothing seemed forced at all. The wording choice & vocab was excellent. I loved the last two lines :] Uh-maze-inggg.

    Such lovely imagery.

    Beautifully penned.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Another wonderfully written peice of poetry by a great poet. I really loved this poem. This line, "Caress my face on your fingertips." I believe should be, "Caress my face with your fingertips." other than that wonderful write, great flow and good structure.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Thank you Everyone.
    All the comments and rates ment alot!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Wishes do come true*

    Aw this poem is so sweet! and true ...Your a good writer your poems are very GOOD!!! 5/5

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