A title is something u have to find urself, somthing u feel passionate towards, something u feel trhe poem is about and what explains it.... ur poem was well written, i liked ur choice of words.... great imagery and flow aswell.... keep it up

This is really a great romantic poem, with very carefully chosen words, it is touchy....
great job.
as far as a title goes, there are couple nice titles that you can use but if this was my own poem i would have titled
(My Antidote) or
(caught into your ecstasy)

i think they will make a great title for this poem, but it is up to you.
great job once again and a 5/5 from me.

Awww... that was sweet... i liked your imagery a lot... as i was reading it i could imagine an angel and everything else that you described... you're good with words... i also felt the emotion... i was smiling as i read it... so sweet... keep up the good work! 5/5 for me!

~angel~

Good emotinal appeal...I

...so good *tear*...i like ur poem. keep up the good work!

It is so good like a true story as if you felt it by heart!

Caress my face on your fingertips.

^^ I think it should be "with" not "on". It just sounds better.

When love forgotten my heart;

^^ It should be "forgot".

Hope casted my dreams aside.

^^ It should be "cast"

This was great and really sweet. The descriptions had good detail, the flow was good, and it was full of emotion. The rhyme scheme worked well until the last stanza and then you cut it off. Try and continue it throughout and I think it will improve it. All in all though, great poem. 5/5

Cute. I realy like it. It's sweet.

Great poem i love the words you used to really explain what you feel you write really well no joke keep writin and ill keep readin them *hugs* lynzie kae

REALLY good!! Lol >.< not fair i cant write like that..

Really Great. WOW

Omg!
i love this poem!!!! you have done so well wrting an image through your words! nice work!!!!
5/5
xox.kayla.xox

That was REALLY good, and even as I was reading it I could feel the emotiions deascribed in this poem...it's really good you should try to see if you can get it published somewhere

Omfg!!!
i lovee this poem
ohh wow it like totally describes me and my ex ed.
but then again i associate everything with ed
tehehe comment my poems
lovee yahh babe

Omfg!!!
i lovee this poem
ohh wow it like totally describes me and my ex ed.
but then again i associate everything with ed
tehehe comment my poems
lovee yahh babe

Aw this poem is so sweet! and true ...Your a good writer your poems are very GOOD!!! 5/5

Thank you Everyone.
All the comments and rates ment alot!

Another wonderfully written peice of poetry by a great poet. I really loved this poem. This line, "Caress my face on your fingertips." I believe should be, "Caress my face with your fingertips." other than that wonderful write, great flow and good structure.

Peace, Joe

Wow, this is soooo absolutley beautiful. It brought this huggge smile on my face. haha. It flowed so well & the rhymes were great. Nothing seemed forced at all. The wording choice & vocab was excellent. I loved the last two lines :] Uh-maze-inggg.

Such lovely imagery.

Beautifully penned.

Bri [x]

This was adorable.
You painted a beautiful picture in my mind.
Your flow was flawless.
& you expressed your love wonderfully.
Great job!
5/5

XxAmberxX