Hahaha i'm glad you mentioned annabel lee at the end, the entire time was reading your poem i was laughing at how you ripped it off! =P

"The words they had said was so chilling"

'were' not 'was', since 'words' is plural

Dammit, don't you have anything else to say?

I concur with sempai, but you did leave out the part where he goes to her grave and stays with her. They had a word for people like him back in the days. They were called MEN

haha i'm just kidding. good rhyme scheme though. 4 pts. from me. -1 cuz i didn't really like that one repetitive line about the prophets