Simply Put

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Nov 30, 2006


One Look
All it took,
One glance
You had your chance

One Look
All it took,
One smile
Every once in a while.

One simple action
caused a crazy,
chain reaction
You caused me to,
Fall so fast for you

Simply put you only said
one little word
that now sticks in my head

As i passed you by
all you did was
simply wave
and simply say 'Hi.'

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  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Haha. cute.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This poem is REALLY cute and innocent! The funny thing is that I have a poem with the same title. I'd love it if you checked it out sometime!
    But I also wanted to thank you for your suppport in my contest. I really appreciated your entry!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by TravisInABottle

    This is a cute little poem and i enjoyed it greatly. it's a short little poem, but sometimes those mean the most. great job on this!

    travis

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really enjoyed this. Like the title says, it's simply put. =P It was very sweet, and straight to the point. The only thing I didn't like was the changing of stanza lines. Your stanza lines went 4, 4, 5, 3, 4. (I mean how many lines you had in each), and to me that made it seem a little jump. Also, always capitalize your 'I's. Overall this, this was very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Beatriz Zamora

    Good take on the
    indescribable
    reasons we feel in love.
    keep up the good work!

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