I really like your poem, its rly cute.

Another great work by you, you are so great with your words and your rhyming, keep it up...........i will be checking on you so write some more of your great talent.5/5

I love your poem keep up the great work!

Aww this really good. it's sad, but wonderfuly written. i really like how you wrote it. it's different. great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Again, i really thought this was a great write. your poems are short, but it's a different style than what i've read before, and i really like it. it's to the point, not complicated and intense vocabulary, but i really like your style... another 5/5 great job, i might check out another, if you don't wanna do three more of my poems you don't have to though

Good take on the
indescribable
reasons we feel in love.
keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed this. Like the title says, it's simply put. =P It was very sweet, and straight to the point. The only thing I didn't like was the changing of stanza lines. Your stanza lines went 4, 4, 5, 3, 4. (I mean how many lines you had in each), and to me that made it seem a little jump. Also, always capitalize your 'I's. Overall this, this was very good.

This is a cute little poem and i enjoyed it greatly. it's a short little poem, but sometimes those mean the most. great job on this!

travis

This poem is REALLY cute and innocent! The funny thing is that I have a poem with the same title. I'd love it if you checked it out sometime!
But I also wanted to thank you for your suppport in my contest. I really appreciated your entry!
~Midnight Sun

Haha. cute.