Misty

I always enjoy looking at peoples' older work because you get to see how much they've grown as a writer and you're no exception. I really enjoyed reading this and thought that it created a really mysterious almost creepy atmosphere but can see the improvement in your writing.

Em xXx

PS The repetition of the word "almost" was really effective

It is beautiful, short but still very powerful, you described emotions superbly. I don't prefer love poetry but this piece is great! It really deserves 5/5

I love your poem keep up the great work!