Helpless

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Dec 1, 2006


All these thoughts in my head
And I can't think with all this baggage
I've givin up
Helpless, I've come to you
For my heart is no more
Now I'm falling away;
Away from the things
I thought were worth waiting for-
Battles I can't fight
Are coming at me from every direction.
I'm falling on my knees;
I can't take anymore.

Escaping now becomes a goal
Not just a fantasy.

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Keep it comeing

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I loved this poem, how bout "loosing battles" or something a long those lines for the title.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    "Escaping now becomes a goal
    Not just a fantasy."

    I loved those lines. Simply because they were isolated from the rest of the poem, that made them very effective. Overall the poem was very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    It was really intersting and i know what you mean by this poems its hard but try to keep your head up..for a tittle you could call it..falling apart..life is not the same...crashing thru the unkown...Rachy

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