Comments : I wish you.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "All these things
    Remember are true
    For my one wish
    Was to have you......."

    Brill ending to a great poem.
    I loved the repetition and the use of the word 'wish'
    Excellent work
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Awww...so sweet. a well-written poem with such a bittersweet ending.
    Charisma*