Forever

by Randomness   Dec 1, 2006


I used to be all your inspiration
All that you ever needed.
You wanted to write me a little Something
So you bought books
And went on-line to help you out.
I don't mind that you get a little Help as long as its from on-line
But A book of poems
It just seems a little to much
Baby is it me?
You say I get on your nerves
I never thought it was to much
Until you started drinking again
I mean you stopped just for me.
Baby am I doing to much?
Am I little clingy
I'm sorry if I was ever in the way
I'm sorry you always had to pay
Baby I love you
Your my boo
And have been for so long
But I guess its all just to wrong
Should I get out of your way?
Before you answer I'll just say okay
I know it is going to be a yes
Though I guess it is best
All my stuff will be out
There is no doubt
That I will forever love you
I guess this is Good-Bye

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    I am going to be honest. this poem utterly confused me. it did not flow very well. and needs punctuation. also a break is needed on line 6. i personally do not get what this poem is about. whats about these books? the meaning is very unclear. also. i do not want to be that mean.. but it is not very poetic. the words and lines do not flow very well. adn its pretty blunt. it gives nothing to wonder(except-what is she talking aobut and huh?)

    I'm not going to vote. but i am simply
    going to say this needs work.

    x3 Lauren

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