I am going to be honest. this poem utterly confused me. it did not flow very well. and needs punctuation. also a break is needed on line 6. i personally do not get what this poem is about. whats about these books? the meaning is very unclear. also. i do not want to be that mean.. but it is not very poetic. the words and lines do not flow very well. adn its pretty blunt. it gives nothing to wonder(except-what is she talking aobut and huh?)

I'm not going to vote. but i am simply
going to say this needs work.

x3 Lauren