Comments : Sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by Nil

    Very nicely written! I'm glad that this had a happy ending, so many of them don't. Keep up the great writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    She stared to get angry
    Resentful and spiteful too
    She couldn't understand
    She didn't know what to do
    This was a great write ,I love it, you have a lot of talent. And I know you are proud of yourself now, keep up the great work, will be reading more 5/5

    Tracy