Comments : Rusty

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was pritty good. Though it's not my favorit. Because some of it flowed while some of it did not. But all in all this was a good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by celi

    Hey that's a really nice poem!i totally understand what you mean, actually i think i'm going through the exact same thing! keep writing cause you really have talent!