DID YOU KNOW

by pinklady   Dec 1, 2006


That every time the cold glass touched your lips my life started to shake and slip .

You made my heart beat fast and ache save you're self for my sake.

How could you was it me or was it you even in time what could i do.

Did i make you do it or was your weakness running through you're harden veins .

Just one hug i wanted you to stay the same in my mind no shame no blame.

Were you so deep in pain you could not see the hurt coiled inside of me.

i loved you but did you know .?

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It was a little hard to read because towards the end you changed your rhyme scheme. But it was a good poem overall, just work on seperating your stanzas better and keeping the scheme the same so the reader can follow it better!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job! I really enjoyed reading this.

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