Comments : True colours

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    The truth no matter how harsh is always better then a lie. another great poem, another fantastic work of art :)))

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    It was a good poem with a strong message hun.
    Really good flow, just one stanza stood out though because it didn't ryhme when the rest did.

    "At first they listened,
    and took into account,
    but now they have realised,
    your nasty pieces of work."

    Apart from that, excellent!
    *Gem*