Such asad but happy poem i loved the ending :))

Very heartfelt as always

"and then looks to the skies,
and says to dear God
"my mummy has died"
please take care of her...."

Just that one stanza threw the poem off course again, lol.
Apart from that, very good poem
*Gem*

Very good poem so so so so sad i loved the ending where shes asleep and happy in her own world
5/5
me x x x

Good job. I really liked it. 5/5. Images flash in ya head when you read this. Keep up the nice work.

Stay Playa,
SC

This is beautiful! I also lost my mom, and can relate 100%!
5/5
xoxo-am

This poem is so sad !! written well...keep up the good work
thanx for the comment!

*dark~blue~eyes*