My third comment now, im on a role!...i get the sense you are in a long distance relationship..no? this poem is sad.. but really sweet! i'm in a long distant relationship, so i know what it feels like to want him really bad, also knowing that it impossible until we are together again.

''What my heart is feeling now
Oh what I want to do
Is get you truly alone
And make passionate love to you ''

Oh my...I love this!
The above stanza was my favourite, I thought it was beautiful.
The flow was flawless without, and I loved the wording ing this.